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Bug 42017 - Typos fixes and text improvements in lldb tutorial
Summary: Typos fixes and text improvements in lldb tutorial
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: General docs (show other bugs)
Version: trunk
Hardware: All All
: P normal
Assignee: Unassigned LLVM Bugs
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Reported: 2019-05-25 04:59 PDT by Dan Raviv
Modified: 2021-04-08 11:05 PDT (History)
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Description Dan Raviv 2019-05-25 04:59:20 PDT 
The tutorial at https://lldb.llvm.org/use/tutorial.html has some typos/potential for improvements:

- "The logical breakpoint has an integer id, and it’s locations..."
it's->its

- "This is an convenient point"
an->a

- "Also the logical breakpoints"
Insert comma after "Also"

- "For instance if you set a breakpoint"
Insert comma after "For instance"

- Some right parentheses have the period before them, some after.

- "(lldb) help <breakpt-id> <breakpt-id> -- Breakpoint ID's consist major and
minor numbers; the major etc..."
Missing newline between the two instances of <breakpt-id>
Comment 1 Jonas Devlieghere 2021-04-08 11:05:24 PDT 
https://reviews.llvm.org/D100053

Thanks Sushma!